Talk:Battle at the Assault Fleet Rendezvous

Copyediting
Whew, this needs some work. I got to the part about the Suliban cloaking device, and I'm like, "WTF?" Not sure what the point of this article is, either--an attempt to portray events leading up to ? What's the source? And what was with all that bolding? Anyway, this needs to be watched. SAS undefined 23:06, 27 April 2007 (UTC)