Talk:Jhamel (STM)

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The article needs to be more encyclopaedic in nature. At the moment, there are too many "real-world" comments in it, i.e. "She came aboard just after the events that happened in the first episode "The Price Of Freedom". Since she hasn't appeared in any current episode yet, nothing more can be told about Jhamel's duties on the Minnesota, however you can read more about her below in the BIO file content." If you need help, look at some other articles for inspiration or contact one of us to help. That's what we're here for! :) Thanks --usscantabrian 20:57, 28 March 2008 (UTC)