Talk:In Harm's Way (Phase II episode)

Just had a look at this with an eye towards nominating it for featured article. My main issue against doing that at the moment is the summary. It ends with more coming soon, so I assume it is incomplete. Given I haven't seen the film I was wondering if anyone will the appropriate knowledge would like to finish it off. Plus maybe see if they can do something about the readability of the Act sections to make them less like huge blocks of text. Apart from the incomplete summary I think this would be a very good featured article candidate. – 13:27, 10 January 2009 (UTC)