Talk:Romany Phoenix

Copyedit
These need to be done before the tag can be removed. Side points (not strictly copy edit things) The manual of style will help you in how to correct format this article. Have a look at Timothy Sinclair and Noel Turner, both are very good examples of well done articles. – 04:05, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * stuff like height, weight (needs to be metric) should be in a sidebar, character.
 * no wikification so that needs improving
 * format the body with the proper style
 * this is meant to be an encyclopaedia so in-universe entries should be in past tense and should read like it is one...if that makes sense.
 * Needs to be referenced
 * Needs to be categorised
 * I removed the image, we don't display images from off the wiki. If you want to use an image you need to upload it.