Talk:Star Trek: Excalibur

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 * In the 12 minute pilot episode, Captain Nelson beams down to Earth at the Starfleet Headquarters in San Fransisco. Upon arrival, he speaks with Yeoman Carter who is manning the front desk, then to Commodore Russell. He reads his book for several minutes as he waits to talk to the Admiral. He meets the admiral and then they talk for a long while in a conference room thats located at dry dock in Earth orbit. Captain Nelson gets a briefing of his mission and his orders. He then mumbles off some Crew changes while with the Admiral. After this is stands up then the Admiral escorts him to the Front Desk he then Checks out/signs he name out of the reception Visitors list for that day. Then he walks back out of the Building he first entered and he then Transported up and then gives his final thoughts and then the credits roll on.

I added the Copyedit tag because this write up isn't working. --Hawku (talk) 01:25, March 23, 2016 (UTC)