Thread:Promethius20/@comment-13447-20160423120843

So, an article you copied directly from Memory Alpha, Verathan, had an edit from this:


 * A Verathan statue depicting Drohlak, the prime ossemite of the 19th dynasty, was among the artifacts offered for auction by Vash on Deep Space 9 in 2369.

To this:


 * A Verathan statue depicting Drohlak, the prime ossemite of the 19th dynasty, was among the artifacts that was going to be offered for auction by Vash on Deep Space 9 in 2369,  that she and Quark would later sell or try to sell also on Starbase Deep Space 9

Yes, the write-up should differ from MA, but, no, it shouldn't be a run-on sentence with repetition. Please don't make edits where you're just making a sentence run-on. 