Copyedit note[]
Article needs a SPAG run through. Style needs work, simple things like ship names (which can be easily done with a template {{uss}} or {{pre}}) and wikification. – JayLR 03:12, 26 February 2009 (UTC)
I enjoyed your Malon Cooperative article.[]
I enjoyed the article regarding the Malon and Deep Space 10, the writers of Star Trek should make good use of your story outline.
With that said I liked how your tried to resolve the Delta Quadrant issue in regards to Federation involvement and the hopes of making a presence there.
And I am very thankful that it all worked out for them in this story.
Thank you
Ryan Charles Dommerman —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 142.47.60.218 (talk) 19:27, 14 January 2011 (UTC).