Copyedit: needs some minor formatting and wikification. Main problem is the grammar and phrasing in places is wrong. – JayLR 05:41, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
- Copyediting completed. Please take a look and see if it meets with your approval. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Wafflesmcduff (talk • contribs) 06:56, November 15, 2014.
- Made some updates. Are you working on Star Trek: Origins? --Hawku (talk) 16:47, November 17, 2014 (UTC)
- No. I just re-played Star Trek: 25th Anniversary CD-ROM for sentimental reasons and decided to do some research to see if the Elasi existed outside ST:25/ST: Judgment Rites. I found this page, and it was good read for a paragraph or two and then it became painful so I decided to see what could be done. I didn't change any content. I just fixed the grammar and spelling and edited for readibility. - WafflesMcDuff
I think we should consider adding some of the information from http://memory-beta.wikia.com/wiki/Elasi. It includes some detail on the Elasi clans, their homeworld, etc - WafflesMcDuff