Rewrite the captain's log sections into an acceptable encyclopaedia entry or it will be removed. - JayLR 05:28, 10 November 2007 (UTC)

Could you please define what you meant at the New Beginnings talk? --DarkKnight 12:46, 11 November 2007 (UTC) (posted on User talk:Jrofeta)
The captain's log parts do not meet the style of the wiki, which is encyclopaedic. You have a character from the story telling the reader what events took place. It should be written from an outside perspective. - JayLR 16:16, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
Right. This isn't a storytelling venue. The question to ask yourself is, 'Would this be found on Wikipedia'? Sasoriza AdmTlk 18:24, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
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