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Reason: Repetitive use of the word ''involve'', + the last five words in this sentence: "The second part, which was the centerpiece, was to have multiple authors write about the same event from the perspective of their crews, ''the Vendoth attack on Earth''." Those last words after the comma are confusing. Shouldn't be a biggie to fix. {{sas}} 23:29, 20 April 2007 (UTC) |
Reason: Repetitive use of the word ''involve'', + the last five words in this sentence: "The second part, which was the centerpiece, was to have multiple authors write about the same event from the perspective of their crews, ''the Vendoth attack on Earth''." Those last words after the comma are confusing. Shouldn't be a biggie to fix. {{sas}} 23:29, 20 April 2007 (UTC) |
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− | Made some changes based on the issues you raised. Is there anything else that stands out to you? [[User:Jrofeta|Jono]] 05:21, 21 April 2007 (UTC) |
+ | :Made some changes based on the issues you raised. Is there anything else that stands out to you? [[User:Jrofeta|Jono]] 05:21, 21 April 2007 (UTC) |
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I take it this has nothing to do with Star Trek: Unity? Just want to be sure about this. That's the impression I get (from both the article and the website). – Sasoriza Adm • Tlk 17:34, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
No connection to Star Trek: Unity
It isn't connected at all with the fanfilm Star Trek: Unity. --Jono 17:52, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
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Reason: Repetitive use of the word involve, + the last five words in this sentence: "The second part, which was the centerpiece, was to have multiple authors write about the same event from the perspective of their crews, the Vendoth attack on Earth." Those last words after the comma are confusing. Shouldn't be a biggie to fix. – Sasoriza Adm • Tlk 23:29, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Made some changes based on the issues you raised. Is there anything else that stands out to you? Jono 05:21, 21 April 2007 (UTC)